|Reviews for Giving Up Hope|
| abstractelysium chapter 1 . 8/26/2012
You have so much potential; I quite enjoyed reading this. The first two lines really hooked me in. I would encourage you to keep exploring your imagery and maybe try straying from the rhyme - you could say more, I think, without it. Also, use your words to let your feelings out - by sharing them with us, you lighten your own burden a little (I've always found).
Thank you for sharing this! abby