Reviews for Out of Time
anonymous song chapter 1 . 8/24/2012
i like the title and i like the idea. i think the chorus could use a little more oomph, such as what you miss doing with them (maybe) or good times that you spent together that really hit you when you realize that you miss them. i like the references to mythology, it makes people think a little and thats a good thing. my favorite line: scraping your lungs for one last breath. great imagery. keep it up :)