Reviews for Light on me
YasuRan chapter 1 . 8/24/2012
I can taste the sunlight on my tongue. Marvelous!
AdorableMe chapter 1 . 8/23/2012
The poem was very well written and very much intense, and deep. Very nice vocabulary and the stanzas were all correctly placed. Very good, keep the great work up!
Ophelia Schmit chapter 1 . 8/23/2012
I loved it, beautiful, unique.

-Hermie
electrical moon chapter 1 . 8/23/2012
Lovely poem! I love the last two stanzas as well as 'velveteen night' and 'the burnt sunshine late in the day, a fat and ravenous glow'