|Reviews for Light on me|
| YasuRan chapter 1 . 8/24/2012
I can taste the sunlight on my tongue. Marvelous!
| AdorableMe chapter 1 . 8/23/2012
The poem was very well written and very much intense, and deep. Very nice vocabulary and the stanzas were all correctly placed. Very good, keep the great work up!
| Ophelia Schmit chapter 1 . 8/23/2012
I loved it, beautiful, unique.
| electrical moon chapter 1 . 8/23/2012
Lovely poem! I love the last two stanzas as well as 'velveteen night' and 'the burnt sunshine late in the day, a fat and ravenous glow'