|Reviews for f l e e t i n g|
| rust phoenix chapter 1 . 8/30/2012
the ending of this poem is very thought-provoking. i love the image of tying strings to days.
| Painted Nose chapter 1 . 8/24/2012
I love the repetition-type thing you have here. It's got a real cool bit of parallelism, that shows (clearly,without losing us) what you're saying. Then at the end, you break it off. I thought that was nice, certainly grabbed my attention.
Anyways, I think this is a lovely little poem, great job!
| AdorableMe chapter 1 . 8/24/2012
It's short and sweet and very well written, but despite the length, I do wish it would've been more elaborated on the tenses. A fresh read, though.
| night62611 chapter 1 . 8/24/2012
short and pleasant, loved the first two lines