|Reviews for Looking|
| One Last Note chapter 1 . 11/27/2012
Short, punchy and interesting, I like this poem. I liked the metaphor of the key, but I think that it is as important to choose the right door (or path). Therefore, I personally would include that. Which ties into my other qualm of this poem - it is way too short for my liking. In my opinion, you cannot truly come to terms with an array of emotions that this short piece suggests in a short seven lines. I also think that the best poems are a little longer, and fully deal with the complexities. Thus I recommend describing them more fully.
Other than that, an excellent piece which I can relate to very well. I think that it really nails the idea that we all feel this aching depression for a moment every now and again. That feeling that we are going the wrong way with our lives and will forever watch from the sidelines. Well done!
| Purplemonkey123 chapter 1 . 9/3/2012
short, simple, and so very true :)