Reviews for Almost
Lilybug134 chapter 1 . 8/25/2012
Wow, this was really good! I know what it's like to contemplate suicide and to think about what would happen to other people if you left. That's what has ultimately stopped me. The one thing that I don't like about this story is the very last paragraph. I think that it should hav ebeen broken into two paragraphs instead of one big paragraph. But other than that, this is very very good!
Lilja Ruusu chapter 1 . 8/24/2012
Wow, intense. You've come a long way in your writing, Lil Jakey :D