Reviews for The Right Amount of Wrong
aliziahnoor chapter 2 . 12/27/2021
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Ella chapter 5 . 8/30/2016
Please continue the story!I really really really want to know the whole story!
Kyra Evans chapter 4 . 4/6/2014
Where are her brothers at this time? Aren't they worried about her and wondering why it's taking the vamp-human sister to get home from feeding? This is a great chaoter though and I'm super surprised that Draven didn't try to kill Dakota right away! (Funny that he has more of a Vampiric name even though he's a werewolf.) Nice job!
Kyra Evans chapter 3 . 4/4/2014
Whoa. This is crazy! Can a vamp really drink from a werewolf without side effects? I hope this doesn't cause trouble between the werewolves and vampires in town! What if Dakota and Kyle start going through weird mutations? Omg! Great chapter!
Kyra Evans chapter 2 . 4/4/2014
Wow. This is a good one so far. I'm so glad she didn't just lunge at the little girl and drink her dry after saving her! Go Dakota! Nice job so far! This is getting really good!
Guest chapter 5 . 2/24/2014
Like the story. Continue!
JigokuTenshi834 chapter 5 . 9/28/2013
Love it, love it, LOVE it! I cannot wait until the next chapter! :D
Kairi Moon Goddess chapter 5 . 8/24/2013
Thank you for the update! I was dying read the next chapter!
claritylong chapter 4 . 8/3/2013
I love the story, you have me captivated. Now I'm just waiting for the next chapter.
Kairi Moon Goddess chapter 4 . 8/1/2013
I really enjoyed this chapter! I do like Samantha's character. There needs to be a aura of calm between the Alpha and her children.
The nerve of that hunter...did he really think he would have gotten away alive? Solves that problem
I wonder what Kota's brothers are going to think? She has been gone for a long time and Jinx seems to hate kind other than his own...I wonder how he will feel with the faint smell of mutt lingering on his sister?

Great chapter!
Kairi Moon Goddess chapter 3 . 8/1/2013
I like it! I like it!
Kairi Moon Goddess chapter 2 . 8/1/2013
Hehe...So far I like her brothers...very protective. On to the next!
Kairi Moon Goddess chapter 1 . 8/1/2013
I must say, I am intrigued so far. I like it.
ColleenScholes chapter 4 . 7/28/2013
ove this story, cant wqit until the next one.
Ty Cavanaugh chapter 4 . 7/27/2013
I love it! Can't wait to see how Dakota reacts when she wakes up ;) great story, keep it going :D
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