|Reviews for The Elyas File|
| Snyffles chapter 2 . 8/26/2012
Hi friend! :D I'm going to keep this short - not because I don't have anything to say, but because I'm at work and I'm running out of break time - but this was fucking awesome. I love the voice you've developed for Elyas so far; there was more than one line that had me empathizing with him. But what I liked the absolute most about this was the bit with the "baby." That was, as far as I'm concerned, made entirely of the purest extract of Win known to mankind. It had an excellent vibe of Horror to it. In my eyes, it was absolutely flawless. And the description of being virtually severed from himself and transported to that realm...? Dee-lish.
In summary: I really like where this is going. Keep it up, chica, and consider me hooked!
| Darth Sparkles chapter 1 . 8/25/2012
Surprise! I exist! Sounds good so far. One question though...how does one pronounce Edamine? lol An unusual name for a notebook...or a person for that matter, but it is certainly memorable. :)