|Reviews for stop crying to the ocean|
| Archia chapter 1 . 10/6/2012
I thought that idea in this was great, and it really said a lot, about emotions and the like. I really liked how the seahorses were used.
| theskeletongirl chapter 1 . 9/8/2012
| the-lovely-anomaly chapter 1 . 8/29/2012
I really like the concept here: giving your heart to the ocean. For some reason it reminds me of that scene in "Titanic" where Rose, as an old lady, drops her necklace into the ocean at the end. Even though I'm not a fan of the movie, I like that scene.
This line of the poem really stands out: "a last memory to keep in the water." It's so sad, but so lovely at the same time.
Nicely done. :)
| electrical moon chapter 1 . 8/26/2012
Lovely poem! I love the idea of giving your heart to the ocean.
| My Parakeet Has Issues chapter 1 . 8/25/2012
I really like this. It's one of the more original poems I've seen on here. The only thing is is that you didn't capitalize your I's. Other than that, I really like it.
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