Reviews for Newshine
BlackSoulDeathKid chapter 4 . 9/3/2012
Well i have to say...i knew it! this story is getting very interesting i can't wait for the next chapter!
Boekenov chapter 1 . 9/3/2012
I really like the story concept. It's great and it definitely feels unique compared to all of the other vampire stories out there. It reminds me a little of Let The Right One In. I would definitely try having the beginning start with the dialogue and then the description of Gideon following it. I love that you opened with a very intense scene. Perhaps give the readers a little more suspense and don't mention the sack of blood until the last moment before he's caught. It make's it that much more intriguing. :) Great job!
viola-writ chapter 4 . 8/29/2012
Wow is all i can say. The new characters are great. Really enjoyed reading this chapter. Waiting to know more about the wife.
viola-writ chapter 3 . 8/28/2012
Great story. Kirk kind of reminds me of Dr. Carlisle Cullen from twilight :) And I like the sweet and innocent Alley. Who wouldn't :D
GlassSpyress chapter 1 . 8/26/2012
Wow. That was great. Ill keep reading. If you keep writing. Lol. Well, if you have the time, would you mind reviewing my story? I would love to have a review from someone as awesome as you. Keep up the good work! I expect great thing ;D
iHBCU chapter 1 . 8/26/2012
Wow, this is like the most awesome story ever! More chapters PLEASE!