|Reviews for The Madman's Journal|
| Vamp712 chapter 1 . 2/6/2015
Wow this is an amazing story! It is intense, adventurous, and different. I mean different in a good way though. I like it, I have never read anything like this before. You are an excellent writer! It vocabulary in this story is great too! My only suggest would be to give a little character description of the twins. But it's still amazing if you decide not to include it.
| Mayu Sun chapter 1 . 8/26/2012
| steph135 chapter 1 . 8/26/2012
:) oh yeah. this is awesome. just plain fricking awesome. this is the type of story im really into. i love mystery and danger, and this is it. i love not knowing whats around the corner in a book. i feel like there is a whole long story\explaination behind everything, and you have to use your brain to find out what that is. this is perfect. its dark, well written and full of mystery. i feel so bad for little max though becuase he's so young, but piper will find a way to help him...i think...see? i still have no idea, and thats great. people like to understand things, and if they dont they feel compelled to try. it's like a trick. you write i mystery and the reader will feel like they HAVE to finish it becuase they want to understand. how awesome is that? :P tricking people into finishing your book.
anyways, you did a great job. i see the charaters pretty well, which is great for a first chapter. before max read the madman john's journal he seemed like the smart, non-risk taking type who still had curiosity like all kids while piper seems adventurous and brave, almost to the point where it's a bad thing. thats okay though, actually that's perfect. they need to have flaws anyway. you did an awesome job of there reactions to, they were very polished and predictable for their personaities. i could see it like a movie in my head, and you know what that means, right? it means its good writing. . proceed