|Reviews for Insane Obsession|
| Swanlet chapter 2 . 9/3/2012
So far I've found both of your main characters to be really interesting and quite well-developed. I'm really interested in where you're going to take them in your story.
Loved your first chapter, and your second chapter did a good job of continuing the action and holding the reader's attention.
My only note is that the new kid seems a little Gary-sueish and perfect, but since this is only the second chapter there hasn't been any time to delve fully into either of the character's personalities. I've really enjoyed your story, and can't wait for you to update soon!
| Snowlilly31497 chapter 2 . 9/3/2012
Wow, so everybody in the school is obsessed with him? (Or, at least they all appear to be...)
| Snowlilly31497 chapter 1 . 8/27/2012
Wow. This pretty much sums up my "relationship" with a guy I liked in middle school. Well done! Very descriptive!