I don't have anything to complain about in this chapter. I enjoyed reading it and couldn't find a possible way to dislike it. Sure I have a whole slew of questions needing answers but they can wait. This chapter didn't make me feel compelled to find the reason behind anything and understand the events which are shaping. The beginning I can say was adorable though. It was a surprise to me because I can honestly say I didn't expect it. Though it was also fun to read. Yuki was too cute for words and then he changed into this person who only seemed to know sex and want nothing but it. It was too innocent to fault anything because he was new to action. I was surprised slightly by you having Sin appear right after they had sex but it was perfect. One of those things which had to be done at a time like that. Other then that the only other thing to get me was the ending, but it was a good feeling so I'm not worried.

Favorite character so far I have to say is Zain or Prat. I like them both.

Love the maze, i also love his sense of direction :) sounds like me

Amazing. Not a new fact though ;)

Again, just wanted to say how much I love this...series i guess the word would be. I really hope you update soon!

I really do love your stories. They're all so interesting and make me wonder what kind of world it really is. How would I feel living there and what things would I learn? Always so wonderful and fun. Not to mention you are right about Zain. I feel as though he will be a great addition to the story with all his weird kinks and such. Rage also seems like a swell character to throw into the mix. I really enjoyed meeting then in this chapter and can honestly say I can't wait for the trouble the two will cause. Another thing, having all the gods show up at the ceremony was great. I can only phantom the faces and reactions everyone made when they saw them especially with Trist smiling that shark tooth smile she has. Can't wait for the next installment of any of the stories.