Reviews for The Silent Musician
Zedekiah chapter 22 . 11/28/2016
Wait you can eat in libraries!?
Sally chapter 25 . 8/9/2014
What happened to Meghan and Jack? I find it weird how Jake is hardly seen, only mentioned and their relationship, so much touched in the start, was hardly touched in the ending chapters. Also, it would have been good if you had mentioned Claire and Benny. What's the point of lavishing so much space to characters you didn't mentioned again? Sure their story was sorta finished, but just for proper ending sake, you should have mentioned all the main characters.
Kat chapter 25 . 6/15/2014
That was amazing.
Thank you.
Alpha-Gal chapter 25 . 1/30/2014
I REALLY LOVED this story! I am a musician myself and when I read this story it influenced me to become more passionate about playing. Just wondering, are you a musician yourself? I loved the plot of this story and how Daniel could love someone who isnt 'popular' when he himeself is 'popular'. Keep up the great writing! And look me up and fanfiction. I would love to see your opinion of my writing skills. Thanks!
DontBlink224 chapter 5 . 1/17/2014
I think you're starting to get away from the "showing" aspect of writing in this chapter. You do not need to explain every action of the main character. You're starting to tell us the story instead of showing us. It's like you're going out of your way to explain why Daniel was dumbfounded or why he was alarmed, or why Marielle was angry. Sometimes the reasons for these don't need to be explicit. Every action and scene in a story should propel it forward, and honestly, I think these explanations are holding it back. Perhaps try rewriting the story, play with the characters a bit more, find out their personalities and know them as friends. Best friends. You could try writing in first person. I think this needs a bit more editing or rewriting before it's complete.
tolivelaughlove chapter 25 . 6/10/2013
How about we not accept its over and do an epilogue or something?
GayMuffin chapter 25 . 2/3/2013
Wow. It was amazing. If i ever become a movie director, i want to turn this to a movie! Haha! But really, amazing story. Great job!
Lupin Phoenix chapter 25 . 1/30/2013
I actually really liked the way it ended. You didn't expect it one bit and that's what makes it unique. Everyone had a tie to her, she and D&M's relationship tied a lot of people together. It's a twist that none had anticipated. I love it. If I could rate it, it'd be 5 out of 5, definitely. :) Can't wait to see what else you can bring to the table in the future.
Guest chapter 25 . 1/27/2013
I can't believe it's over :'( gonna miss waiting and bugging to find out what's happening next chapter :( loved the story still my fav. Couples ever are Mar. And Dan and Nadia and George :) such a sad ending :'( I wish Bryrony could have lived till prom ad graduation :'( but overall an amazing story and I am gonna miss it :) so goodbye The Silent Musician goodbye :p
Sarah-Brighteyes chapter 25 . 1/27/2013
I liked this story.

are you sure its over? lol

I know its reality to have ppl not make it in a relationship out of highschool and into college but its a little depressing lol especially since d and m seem so in love! reality bites hahha

I love your story though and b dying is just another reality check and warning to others!

Good story! I think you should fast forward ten years and bring the chars back for a reunion! :)
Sarah-Brighteyes chapter 24 . 1/27/2013
oh my gosh! I did not see her dying :(
Lori Jane Summers chapter 25 . 1/27/2013
...WHY! Girrr i loved Bryony, she was awesome !

Anyway really great, hope to read more soon ;P
Hippy-Princess-Razorart chapter 25 . 1/26/2013
Great ending... but. still no. .
everyone'sfavoritenerd chapter 24 . 1/23/2013
No! You did not just kill her! I love your story, but NOOOO!
Guest chapter 24 . 1/22/2013
I can't believe Byrony is gone :'( I'm gonna miss her it was envoy able it was gonna happen but she was so young :'( I feel so bad for Brian they only just got back together :'( :'( :'( so sad :'( but on the other more positive side of the story I 3 mar and dan they are the cutest couple ever XD XD XD awwww Nadia and George are gonna move into together 3 they are also a match made in heaven as oh
Say XD XD XD I don't want the start to end :'( oh well I guess we have next chapter and it better be good ;) but I guess all good things come to an end eventually :p xxxxxxxxxxxx
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