|Reviews for rainbow|
| Guest chapter 3 . 3/27/2013
yellow is seen as easy prey
but yellow is the sun
it is the strength that gives life
stay the way you are
| Princess-anna57 chapter 1 . 8/29/2012
This is really nice, I like it a lot! Write on please :)
| Huxley chapter 1 . 8/29/2012
The rhyme scheme at the very end got to me... The stanza
"so small perfect rose..."
until the end was really touching and was what I'd call a "cool rhyme".
If you'd had that kind of scheme throughout the poem, it
would've been perfect.
It's really good, though. Keep writing! :D