Reviews for The Rose Lullaby
BookAbooK chapter 1 . 9/29/2012
Guest... He randomly enters the apartment, she opens because she remembers him. They do not each other, that is why they presented themselves. :)
Guest chapter 3 . 9/29/2012
Wow. Amazing chapter. One thing doesn't make sense though. If Gabriel doesn't know her or recognize her, how did he come to her house? I don't know it's a bit strange but Gabriel seems sweet ] I want to see what happens there D
XxSaMMiExX06 chapter 2 . 9/14/2012
Hmm.. I'm still uncomfortable with Ellie leaving her mother but hey, I'm sure I'll find out why soon. Dominic... Interesting. I wonder if they're going to like start falling for each other or something... Good chapter ]
XxSaMMiExX06 chapter 1 . 8/30/2012
The story is interesting.. I liked the summary. I don't understand why Ellie would leave her mother though. If your mother is dying of cancer and if Ellie claims she loves her mother, she wouldn't be leaving her. Try going a bit into detail about that or a bit more realistic. So far good job though.