Reviews for The Oracle |
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![]() ![]() Please keep going omg I thought it was complete T_T |
![]() ![]() ![]() Oh i hope you continue with this story. although i notice it hasn't been updated in a while. It sounds pretty cool though :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() What? What is so bad we never will get to see the page :/ why? Jesus why? |
![]() ![]() ![]() Omg update |
![]() ![]() ![]() Nice update! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Cool story so far. It's cool Aubrey has all these powers, & hopefully she'll actually be able to use them in battle instead of fainting in a corner somewhere like most stories would have their "all-powerful" heroines do. I have high hopes for this fic, please don't fall for the trope. I think they should do some training/exercises on controlling her feelings since they're so closely tied to her powers. Not bashing, but I think the romance is sweet, but could use some work. It's very 2-dimensional. Hot Supernatural Guy falls in love almost instantly with his Hot-But-Doesn't-Know-It Charge. It's formulaic. I mean, could you include conversations between Aubrey and her love interests dealing with complex topics, supernatural, political, & whatever? What if, yknow, Isaiah believes in the death penalty or whatever? Aubrey is a die-hard Communist? SOMETHING to give everyone a deep background. That'd be way more interesting & genuine than them arguing over something petty and kissing and making up all the time, in my opinion. Keep improving, it's a really great concept you have. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Poor Aubrey :( Leave it to Alex to love her :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() What is Siren. Great update. Take as long as you need until you can update :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() Great chapter. Can't wait until the 24th. :) :) :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() That was hot! Great writing. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Great chapter |
![]() ![]() ![]() Dude, poor him:( |
![]() ![]() ![]() Lovely chapter. It's great to see Aubrey exploring her powers! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Love the confrontation between Isaiah and Alex! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Wow! Great chapter. |