Reviews for Waiting
Faithless Juliet chapter 1 . 9/22/2012
Formatting is okay, I don't really care for putting the poem in the center, I think it distracts too much from the words themselves, and I don't care for your A/N at the end, being that it is also distracting. It sound weird that you don't know what the formatting is called even though you're using it.

I really liked the emotions your displayed in this. The overal meaning is a bit vague but I think that helps add to the mystique of the piece. You let the writer imprint their own feelings/situation with th words and helps them form a stronger connection to it. Nicely done.

C.J. Black chapter 1 . 8/31/2012
Again, I love the power and emotion you put into each and every poem. Love it :D
walls-have-ears chapter 1 . 8/31/2012
I think it's called free-verse, but I'm not entirely sure. Well that was a dark poem, I think you could write more like these :) good job!
Mayu Sun chapter 1 . 8/31/2012
Dark... I love it.
Natari Mirumura chapter 1 . 8/31/2012
A very strong and amazing poem. Very effective and one can tell a lot of emotions were placed. Amazing job, keep it up :D