Reviews for My Best Friend
Jon Berkley chapter 1 . 9/25/2012
Jeez, this is really messed up. That's good, by the way ;)
Poor Johnny, tries to help a bullied boy and then he gets tortured and killed for it in return.
Anihyr Moonstar chapter 1 . 9/20/2012
CREEPY.

I think you achieve your aim - horror - well. You blend off a nice mix of the past to give a little glimpse into the characters and add depth, but it also serves to make it that much more chilling when faced with the present reality of what's going on. One really feels for Johnny - who only did what he thought was right - when he gets repaid with twisted cruelty.

I do feel though, partially due at least to how short this is, I have trouble *believing* in the story. The narrator seems too mad - the situation too absurd - without insight into how he went from simply a bullied kid to batsh*t insane. Maybe that's just me, but I had a little trouble piecing those two pictures together.

Still, all around I think you did a good job. :)

- Moonstar
Bloody Lullaby chapter 1 . 9/2/2012
This is excellent, just...wow. Words cannot explain how amazed I am by this story.
Guest chapter 1 . 8/31/2012
is it a bad thing that i laughed at the ending? x.x
babby girl chapter 1 . 8/31/2012
these is a good story
Mayu Sun chapter 1 . 8/31/2012
So horrific, its wonderful
walls-have-ears chapter 1 . 8/31/2012
I like this story, it's dark, and I liked the background, too - it all made sense. This was a great piece, keep up the good work!