Reviews for Creative Writing Journal
luccava chapter 3 . 9/7/2012
"they seem almost plastic, fake, programmed."
nice words! I really like this piece xD
RayRayElisabeth chapter 5 . 9/2/2012
Okay so like just stop I can;t handre it ok just ughhhh stahhhp NO bwvhqfwf;oV;O

OKAY SO FIRST
you can't just say I have a great rack, oh no, I have a fucking VOLUPTUOUS FIGURE
and the face thing ugh
i say nothing perfectly i make no fucking sense

SECOND
i can't talk what are you even i only can words in writing and even then THIS SHIT OCCURS LIEK WAHT EVAHNN

THIRD
I like this paragraph a lot okay just hnng feels I can't

FOURTH
t'would be a short list, thanks for not embarassing me further you BITCH LET ME SHOW YOU THE DOOR GODDAMN IT YOU'R MY FAVORITE PERSON

Love,
Ray
RayRayElisabeth chapter 3 . 9/2/2012
Dude, if you think everyone at school's "flawless," you must be blind. That's all I'm saying.

Love,
Ray
RayRayElisabeth chapter 2 . 9/2/2012
I like this a lot :) Did people actually say stuff? 'Cause I never heard anything. Like, ever. Even at the buses.

I don't count that as out first kiss, though, in my mind. When I think of our first kiss, I think of your last day that year when I kissed you on the cheek and you were just like bitch please and kissed me *blushface*

Love,
Ray