Reviews for Watching
FenrirVior chapter 1 . 9/25/2012
Wow, this is really good, I love the idea. Slightly confused as to how the corpse would speak. Or is it a spirit? Either way, very well written and very interesting. Your creature. I like it. ANOTHER! xD
The Hetalians chapter 1 . 9/9/2012
I didn't understand everything, really, but I think I will if you post another chapter. xD
Perswante chapter 1 . 9/3/2012
Very amusing read. Great description of events and characterization, the monster's reactions to the idiot pair was humorous and the story was oddly intriguing. It's kind of twisted with a cynical hint of humour, I like that.

Formatting is a bit of a problem though. Maybe it's just I who loves his paragraphs, but the one line per sentence thing got pretty old, although I suspect it was intentional to convey a certain feeling of suspense to the audience.