Reviews for Rant
Trinity Fai chapter 1 . 2/16/2013
Awww! Is this true because this is so beautifully sad. It kinda reminds me of someone I used to love several years ago. X'C I miss him, love him, and hate him.
Again awesome work with words. Kudos.
Kitty chapter 1 . 9/7/2012
lol I hate him.

But I understand the feeling, just a little. There are those people that you never ever let go; sometimes because you remember being happy with them, and sometimes because they taught you something important. I think this is a little of both. Though I've never been in love, I get the obsession, the compulsion, the endless devotion even when he doesn't even bat an eye. Who knows why he has that effect on people, yeah?

But anyway. The imagery is so beautiful. Even if I didn't know, I feel like I'm there, Bunny. It's not a type of syntax that you usual use either. So, I definitely find the emotion.

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MagicWords chapter 1 . 9/3/2012
Wow this was really powerful. I love the splendid bruise like a kiss part. Very pretty. In instances, I too have felt the pain of this loss. It stays with you even after you've moved on. Keep your head up and keep writing!