|Reviews for Chain|
| Augment3d Reality chapter 1 . 10/9/2012
I do like how this links to "Crying a Dry River." It makes your writing like a concept album in some ways, which is very clever.
The alliteration of "coiling / curling" is very well done, especially with both words having the same "ing" ending too.
| True Talker chapter 1 . 9/3/2012
I DON'T want you to feel this way. I CARE ABOUT YOU.