Reviews for Ever After |
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![]() ![]() ![]() I'm sorry it took me a while to review :( I really want to know what happens next. This is a really good story. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Different take on an old cliche! Makes it uncliche! I love this! Into the next chapter! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Truthfully, she deserved that at least a little. No matter how bad the other person behaves, it doesn't help to surrender your own dignity as a response. Better to give a cold shoulder or icy politeness than to cuss at another person and descend to their level. It's been so long since I started reading this that I may need to go back and refresh, but didn't he act like a jerk first? Or is her reaction to him chemistry: some part of her finds him attractive and therefore his attitude stymies her usual good nature? |
![]() ![]() ![]() Ouch they're as bad as each other. Can't wait to see how this trip plays out. Good luck with your exams! ;-) |
![]() ![]() ![]() You're a very good writer! Your style is just so smooth and easy to follow. Keep up the writing! It's SUPER good! |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Oh I like this. She's very supportive of her mom. Cool twist how she slept with her boss, though :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() This girl's life is a comedy routine. She would be great on a reality show because something would always happen to her. Poor girl. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Awwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww that was so sweet! *wipes tear* I noticed the All Time Low and Paramore references lol I kind of freaked out at the Paramore one lol. This was chapter was long, but sweet! Amazing! |
![]() ![]() ![]() I love this! You can really tell already that Tay and her mom are really close. It was sweet and funny at times, and I really felt bad for Tay's mom. Great job! :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() CRIMINAL MINDS! Gotta love that show Review: Like it so far XD I think the way Tay's mom dropped the bomb shell was rather realistic. Since Tay didn't react immediately but took her time guessing so it's pretty good so far |
![]() ![]() ![]() i liked it, very surprising, but i like it :D i will be reading more of it, though. Very interesting. Haven't read a story like this before, actually. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Wow! This is an amazing story. I should say that you had me interested in it right from the time when i read your summary :) I like Tay as a character so far. she is cool and sweet at the same time ;) Logan is also cool but alas...Sam has won over everyone else XD ;) :P I am curious how this will turn out. You are an amazing author, keep writing and updating fast (hehe). Only suggestion would be to actually start on with the story line quickly. |
![]() ![]() This looks very promising, but there are a couple of mistakes. You typed, "...noticed that her she..." and "it was...and honest mistake..." |
![]() ![]() ![]() Well I'm glad Liam was friendly - although he probably wants to get friendlier hehe ;-) Logan was a bit harsh, although I think seeing Liam and Tay so close had more of an effect than he was letting on hmmm... ;-) |