Reviews for Ever After
Legadema chapter 11 . 9/27/2014
I'm sorry it took me a while to review :(

I really want to know what happens next. This is a really good story.
Nikki Oly chapter 1 . 5/9/2014
Different take on an old cliche! Makes it uncliche! I love this! Into the next chapter!
leavesfallingup chapter 11 . 3/12/2014
Truthfully, she deserved that at least a little. No matter how bad the other person behaves, it doesn't help to surrender your own dignity as a response. Better to give a cold shoulder or icy politeness than to cuss at another person and descend to their level.

It's been so long since I started reading this that I may need to go back and refresh, but didn't he act like a jerk first? Or is her reaction to him chemistry: some part of her finds him attractive and therefore his attitude stymies her usual good nature?
renegade01 chapter 11 . 3/9/2014
Ouch they're as bad as each other. Can't wait to see how this trip plays out. Good luck with your exams! ;-)
keelykelly chapter 10 . 3/6/2014
You're a very good writer!
Your style is just so smooth and easy to follow.
Keep up the writing! It's SUPER good!
Jadeisnotonfire chapter 10 . 1/18/2014
joonmonjagi chapter 1 . 1/11/2014
Oh I like this. She's very supportive of her mom. Cool twist how she slept with her boss, though :)
leavesfallingup chapter 10 . 1/4/2014
This girl's life is a comedy routine. She would be great on a reality show because something would always happen to her. Poor girl.
WritesForever chapter 2 . 1/1/2014
Awwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww that was so sweet! *wipes tear* I noticed the All Time Low and Paramore references lol I kind of freaked out at the Paramore one lol. This was chapter was long, but sweet! Amazing!
WritesForever chapter 1 . 1/1/2014
I love this! You can really tell already that Tay and her mom are really close. It was sweet and funny at times, and I really felt bad for Tay's mom. Great job! :)
EKADLZBIVKelksbliaowdxvnczbk chapter 1 . 12/31/2013
CRIMINAL MINDS! Gotta love that show

Like it so far XD I think the way Tay's mom dropped the bomb shell was rather realistic. Since Tay didn't react immediately but took her time guessing so it's pretty good so far
Purpletastic chapter 1 . 12/31/2013
i liked it, very surprising, but i like it :D i will be reading more of it, though. Very interesting. Haven't read a story like this before, actually.
cloudy dream chapter 9 . 12/30/2013
Wow! This is an amazing story. I should say that you had me interested in it right from the time when i read your summary :)
I like Tay as a character so far. she is cool and sweet at the same time ;) Logan is also cool but alas...Sam has won over everyone else XD ;) :P
I am curious how this will turn out. You are an amazing author, keep writing and updating fast (hehe).
Only suggestion would be to actually start on with the story line quickly.
Abbey chapter 1 . 12/30/2013
This looks very promising, but there are a couple of mistakes. You typed, "...noticed that her she..." and "it was...and honest mistake..."
renegade01 chapter 9 . 12/29/2013
Well I'm glad Liam was friendly - although he probably wants to get friendlier hehe ;-) Logan was a bit harsh, although I think seeing Liam and Tay so close had more of an effect than he was letting on hmmm... ;-)
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