Reviews for At The Office |
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![]() ![]() ![]() It's been a while can you update now... Author |
![]() ![]() ![]() Very hot! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Wouldn't all the wolves in the office be able to smell their arousal when they leave Auden's office after lunch? |
![]() ![]() ![]() All of Tiffany's lines are so cliche. And why doesn't Auden just fire her? Does everyone in the pack have to work for his company? |
![]() ![]() ![]() Please continue this story! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Sorry to hear about you having to move. I do hope that you can update soon! It is a fun story! Thanks |
![]() ![]() That "I love you" moment was DEFINITELY cute! I loved it! As for Ryan, I feel that he could be a better friend if he wasn't so jealous all the time, but hey, it keeps the story interesting. I have to give you props on this event (Gabi's kidnapping) though. I really spiked up the interest level when I was about to search for another story. And another thing: I LOVE how Gabi is not all cowering and such. She's AWESOME! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Best of luck with everything. Hope you can relax and write again soon. Take care of yourself! |
![]() ![]() ![]() This story is really awesome! |
![]() ![]() My perception of Auden changed with his POV, I like his character a bit more I feel bad for Ryan.. He seems like a sweet guy that loves Gabi but she doesn't feel the same way. Am I right? I don't like Gabi |
![]() ![]() She gave in too easily lol. I say this because she doesn't know him at all And doesn't she find it weird that her boss wants her to spend her lunch with him for being late.. What kind of work place disciplines staff like that? |
![]() ![]() Gabi, Gabi, Gabi.. She is too naïve I don't buy it But I'm curious about Mr. Tate. On with the story |
![]() ![]() Hmm Gabi and Ryan sure act like lovers for two friends.. Your story seems promising |
![]() ![]() ![]() Hey there. While I like the plot of the story, there's one thing that is taking away from the overall quality. I understand that you say this story is not edited, but that doesn't mean you can't go back once or twice and re-read what you've written. There are grammar mistakes, omitted words and multiple typos that distract from your story. It honestly only takes about ten minutes to just read it over and make sure mistakes like that don't come up. Keep up the good work though. It's a very interesting story. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I love this story soo much. Update soon |