Reviews for The Return
ThePetrovaFire chapter 1 . 9/4/2012
The title put a huge smile on my face ;)
It's very eloquently written and shows the two sides of your emotional state caused by "the return". Very beautiful. I see the last verse as a mixture between a response to the promises which are seen in this and a summary of the emotions in the whole poem. Anyway, this verse is great, just as the poem itself! "Bittersweet and melancholic"