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britishbrunette chapter 1 . 3/24/2013
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Realmentealpedo chapter 7 . 2/14/2013
Nice chapter! I like the way this is going, so keep it up! )
Guest chapter 7 . 2/13/2013
Your story is amazing. I look forward to reading about what happens next.
Nalledia chapter 7 . 2/13/2013
Interesting twist to bring in Mia's maker - I wonder what part he will play, and whether or not Mia will eventually give in to the bloodlust, or whether still being in transition can eventually make her 'human' again…. I am, as always, looking forwards to the next chapter!
Jerusalem2045 chapter 6 . 1/24/2013
That was dramatic! lol...only thing I would say is I found a disconnect between the concerned father in one scene and the knife holding, yelling father in the next, and a mother who throws a knife at her only child...but that could be their fear talking i dunno, just find it a bit hard to swallow.

but otherwise, great writing! keep it up!
Jerusalem2045 chapter 5 . 1/24/2013
i liked this chapter...the exploring of skills at night :) cute
Jerusalem2045 chapter 4 . 1/24/2013
This was a good chapter...I like to mystery surrounding Jace...so far not twilightish! ;)
DemonsDaughter97 chapter 6 . 1/23/2013
I really (!) like ur story! Please update at a reasonable ( ;) ) speed!

-DemonsDaughter97 XD
britishbrunette chapter 3 . 1/13/2013
I love this story so much! It's an original and unique take on the vampire genre, but it's more refreshing and new than the twilight and Vampire Diaries themed stories. I love how vampires are shunned and loathed by society; it's different from other stories. I think your plot is great and very well thought out - congratulations on such a great story! It deserves a lot more credit than it's given and I will be here anxiously waiting for the next chapter!
Nalledia chapter 6 . 1/9/2013
Good to see another chapter. I really liked how Mia's father had a moment where he wondered if she was still the same person; it will make for interesting tension. I do wonder, though, when Mia will need to drink blood, and where she'll get it from. Looking forwards to the next!
Guest chapter 6 . 1/7/2013
Thanks for the new chapter, it was awesome!
Tututlululu chapter 5 . 12/15/2012
I think you're doing an awesome job. Keep on it!
Realmentealpedo chapter 5 . 12/15/2012
I think that you have a great story in your hands and I can't wait for the next chapter. I think that they are both interesting characters and I love the way they interact. )
Nalledia chapter 5 . 12/15/2012
It's nice to see you fleshing out the abilities a vampire has - it puts a perspective on what Mia can and can't do. Jace's past is just getting more and more interesting, and I can't wait to find out more about him. I think, also, some hints on how exactly the government found out about vampires would be a nice addition. Hurry with the next one!
Vamp chapter 5 . 12/15/2012
Your story is amazing ! I cant till next chapter comes
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