|Reviews for The Diameter of a Glass|
| Velvet Vixen chapter 1 . 9/9/2012
I really liked the things that were grouped together - the Earth, scotch and death. They seem so different but that in itself makes a point about the state of mind of the voice of the poem. It was also interesting that the voice didn't want to live for an eternity. All the different things I thought you included all came together to create a picture when, separately, they don't mean very much.
I felt as though the 'longed for' should be hyphenated to help with the flow but, apart from that, another very nice poem.