Reviews for Peregrin Academy
Marie867 chapter 1 . 9/4/2012
Hi! I really liked it! I saw your summary and thought I would give it a shot, worth it! :) Keep going! I would like to read more! (One hint, you might want to fix the last word. You're looking for lose. Not loose ;) but other than that it was great!)
Redz chapter 1 . 9/4/2012
Not bad, but you made a few mistakes.
1. "what did I have to loose?" should be "lose"
2. "Among, their rich, posh friends, I must be embarrassing them" there shouldn't be a coma after "Among".
3. "I bet by the time I was fourteen and they still hadn't..." review the sentence structure.
4. "'of the rails son/daughter!" should be "off"
5. This isn't really wrong, but it seems weird to say that silence erupts. Silence invades, maybe, but not erupts.
Well, don't hate me for pointing out mistakes. If anyone reviewed me I'd like them to do the same.
weasleyjumper chapter 1 . 9/4/2012
Asdfghjkl! I love it! More please! Brilliant!