Reviews for Beyond
runwayx23 chapter 13 . 12/10/2012
This is extremely well written; it should definitely have more follows/reviews. The world you created has just the right amounts of magic and reality. The characters, too, are believable and well-developed. I'm looking forward to reading more.
Anybodythere chapter 13 . 12/9/2012
This chapter was a bit slow, but I really liked it, dunno why XD I really want to hear more of Moark. I hope next chapter will be his.
CharissaKarn chapter 12 . 12/3/2012
AWWWWWWWH i love it! :D YAY! :D cannot wait to read more! :D
CharissaKarn chapter 11 . 11/15/2012
:D SO HAPPY TO READ MORE! :D thank you, thank you, thank you! :D teehee please update again soon! :D looking forward to reading more! :D
CharissaKarn chapter 10 . 11/1/2012
Woah! that is trippy! :) i like it! :D looking forward to reading more! :)
Jenny chapter 10 . 10/28/2012
Whew! So it took me a long time to catch up, but it was so worth it! This story is great!
CharissaKarn chapter 9 . 10/22/2012
Woah! :) this was awesome! :D cannot wait to read more! :D
Anybodythere chapter 8 . 10/8/2012
I actually think this chapter was great, though, in my, opinion, Natalie feels too much tingling. Still, good work. Always enjoying it :)
CharissaKarn chapter 8 . 10/7/2012
this was an amazing chapter! i have a question, why wasn't Scorpio there with Natalie when the three guys were "attacking" her? Please update again, soon! :D
CharissaKarn chapter 7 . 9/29/2012
Ahhhhh, I am so addicted! :D ahaha love it! :) please update again, soon! :D
Anybodythere chapter 6 . 9/28/2012
Oh, not a cliffhanger, please. That's so cheap.
Guest chapter 5 . 9/16/2012
Yeh, I'm too lazy to log in. Anyway, cool chapter. I'm guessing Moark is a key character in the story.
Mini chapter 4 . 9/12/2012
Keep up the good work! I have enjoyed reading this so far, and it was be nice if you updated new chapter soon. I enjoyed it very much.
Anybodythere chapter 4 . 9/12/2012
I like how the story's going so far. And I think Leo is soooo cute :) There are still Stars missing, though. Where are they?
Anybodythere chapter 3 . 9/10/2012
First story I read on this site, and I must say I'm not disappointed, though I'm still a bit confused as to what's going on. Anyway, good job.
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