Reviews for Stranger Tides
Anndi chapter 2 . 6/10/2013
Oh, so sad, but so damn beautiful! :)
Desertfyre chapter 2 . 3/23/2013
Awesome story! I would love to read more to this story! Love the concept!
Hapa chapter 1 . 9/4/2012
Loved your story!
Mieu-san chapter 1 . 9/4/2012
Aww, how cute! I really like the premise and the story. Summary isn't bad either! And your writing is very nice, with some minor blips.
It was sometimes a little hard to follow who was talking because you would separate the same person's speech into different paragraphs without really clarifying, and I felt like the story moved a little too fast sometimes-for instance, the narrator instantly forgets everyone on the boat until she sees them again and she accepts Jakob oddly fast. But the story flowed very well and although it was long enough that I am contractually obligated to advise you to shorten it, it wasn't hard to read at all. It was chock full of good writing and interesting ideas.
Keep at it!