Oh My God! An Update! Awesome! :)

Awesome chapter! The ending was super cute! I can't wait to read more of this and Cartwright Hall so I really hope you update them both soon! :)

I'm so happy you updated!

Tomas responses to Reuben are so adorable.

I'm happy that you'll be updating Cartwright Hall.

Thanks for updating! I'm that there wasn't any bad reactions to him forgetting his phone. I'll be very happy if you eventually update.

Don't force yourself to write a chapter...take your time.

I'm so glad that Reuben is so forgiving! It would have been so frustrating if everything had been ruined again

I'm glad that you are powering through having a hard time writing. I really love this story and I love it when you update!

I can't wait for the Cartwright Hall update! It's been so long!

I can't wait to read more, please update soon!

I think this and the last chapter were fine. Don't worry.

Feel bad for Tomas, but at least he's made a decision.

Thanks for updating and congrats on graduating!

UGH! Pleeeeaaaaase say that the fact that he couldn't find his phone doesn't ruin everything! That would suck!

Thank you for updating! Congrats on graduating!

I can't wait to read more! Please update soon!

Eeek, a sex scene...I am notoriously awkward about these. But I'm going to be mature about it and just write my review (I'm an adult, I swear! :P).

So I really like the emotional aspects towards the middle of this chapter, the disappointment and then the vulnerability/comfort thing. I understand why Tomas made the choice to walk out of his meeting, etc., all the stuff that led up to the sex, because you described his emotions. But then we get to the actual sex and that just...stops, which felt a little weird to me. You give us all the details about what happens, but not about how the characters feel beyond the physical "sex feels good" stuff, so as a reader I'm not really sure what this development means to them. Of course not all sex has to be emotionally charged, but in this case the events leading up to it are so emotionally charged that it feels a little lacking. I'd like to see, maybe in the next chapter, how this encounter will affect the way they relate to each other and what Tomas' thoughts and feelings are after the fact.

All in all it's a good chapter though, a plot-propelling sort of chapter which is always a good thing, so I'll be keeping an eye out for the next update. Happy writing!

XOXO

- Jessie -

That sex scene was so wonderfully well written. It wasn't awkward at all, very fluid and incredibly...exciting to read! Reuben is such a gorgeous character, exactly my favourite kind of man.
Keep up the lovely work.

Poor Tomas! All that work! God that must be soooo frustrating! I'd probably give up altogether if something like that happened to me!

Yay! Finally! Please say that they are no longer gonna be dummies and that they will now finally be together!

Thank you so much for the update! Please update soon!

Hi! So I had been planning on reading this for awhile and I finally got around to it (I am so slow, omg), and I'm glad I did. I'm not the greatest reviewer, but I'm going to just write down some random thoughts that I have.

The very last sentence of this chapter was beautiful, I love it. I think that as the story has gone on your writing has become less expository and more narrative, we get lots of descriptive imagery instead of just blocks of information, and that's a good thing. I think you're headed in a good direction there. It makes Tomas easier to relate to simply because instead of saying, 'Tomas thinks x about y,' you show us why he feels that way. We believe him more when we feel it ourselves.

As a character I'm not entirely sure what to think about Tomas yet. He was a bit distant in the first few chapters, he's becoming less so now, and I think it's because of the shift in writing style. I like the character flaws you've included, the sort of overly studious, quick-to-judge attitude he has. You've got a great setup to be able to show him adjust his outlook at the end of the story, and that's one of my favorite things, something I think is missing in a lot of the romance stories I've read. A relationship between two people that's all lovey-dovey and happily ever after is great, but what's even better is when the relationship enables them to grow emotionally, accept new ideas, just become better people in general. Then it's not just vacuous romance. That's the sort of story I want to read, and so far it seems like that's where you're headed, so I'm looking forward to the rest.

As far as updating, don't even stress on it. Real life comes before stories, and I'm sure everyone understands that. I'll be glad to read the next chapter whenever it appears, and I'm happy to wait as long as that takes. Good luck!

XOXO

- Jessie -

The way you included their conversation did work. I really hope Reuben hasn't given up on Tomas. And an evil plan, should I be scared? :) I'm curious what you have planned. I can only guess what will happen, but my guesses are probably wrong, so I look forward to the next chapter.

Please, please, please, please, please write more! I missed it so much! I love this story and I want to know what happens!

Thanks for the update!

UGH!
TOOOOOMAAAAASSSSSSSSSSSS! GRRRRRRRRRRRRRRR!

At the beginning of the chapter I was like 'AWWWW they are soo cuute!' And now I'm just sad and disappointed and I feel bad for both of them!

Thank you soo much for updating! Please Please Please update soon!

(P.S. Are you planning on updating Cartwright Hall anytime soon?)