|Reviews for Numb|
| Ophelia Schmit chapter 1 . 9/8/2012
For some reason I feel like this is inspired by Linkin Park. Am I right?
Yeah, so anyway, let me go on in my pointless review. You made the person sound NOT human, yet he is. It's very good.
| C.J. Black chapter 1 . 9/7/2012
You should write music... I think you would be good at it.
| walls-have-ears chapter 1 . 9/5/2012
Great poem, it was easily understandable. Well written!
| BlameMyMuses chapter 1 . 9/4/2012
Nice execution of a focus that has been around the block a few times. Despite the theme, you still made it interesting.
Good choice of layout, definitely suits the poem!
Loved the repetition of 'beat', it gave the literal image of a heart beating.
Nicely done - good job on expressing numbness without resorting to a host of cliches.
| Morbid Book Of Demented Poetry chapter 1 . 9/4/2012
Perfect. This describes many feelings that lack words, and for this I thank you. This was portrayed very well, and I am glad I took a chance to read it. I like the flow of the lines, and how narrow they are on the paper. (paper... wow) anyways... thank you again.