You should definitely continue this! I would love to read now if these two! Good job and keep writing!

write one about a mermaid and a surfer.

Sweet :)

This is beautiful. Absolutely beautiful. It's wonderful and an enjoyable read.

I oved your story and even though it was a bit sad I thought it had the perfect ending :)

HEY there! I love your one shot. It just wasn't about sex and all. (It was fantastic) It was about love. I hope you write a one shot about them too when they like confess or some thing... :))) Can't wait. :D

Wow, this is totally amazing story! I hope they do continue to see each other though or perhaps hook up again when they finish College or whatever... I love the chemistry between them.

OMG! I hope you continue with this story its very good. Wpuld like to see a much deeper involvement. I dont know...even after they finish college or something... But I like the story lin so I cant wait for your next update ;-)