|Reviews for Forever|
| Alaeryel chapter 19 . 2/1/2013
I THINK YOU HAVE OUTDONE YOURSELF with this chapter Life-I am GLAD for Shotgun-WONDERFUL man! This chapter actually BROUGHT TEARS TO MY EYES GIRL and I guess I was actually EXPECTING something much more different! I cannot wait for the sequel so on my way there now-YOU LEFT ME DEVOID OF SPEECH!
| Alaeryel chapter 18 . 2/1/2013
OMG OMG OMG-YAY-THEY ARE TOGETHER! Happy dancing quietly as sis in bed-LOL! BEAUTIFUL, AMAZING AND BRILLIANT Life!
| Nami98 chapter 19 . 1/29/2013
Great job! :D So glad oyu updated! :)
| Alaeryel chapter 17 . 12/22/2012
Oh my dear Life-please I know I have been remiss in keeping up with my reading but please I really hate the idea of you giving up on it completely! I CANNOT BELIEVE Ophelia forgot Jared but I do know after such a TERRIBLE accident it does happen but my HEART BROKE for the stupid jerk who isn't so stupid anymore-he really does love her! I won't convince you to continue if it isn't your heart to do so-but it does sadden me as I SOOOOOOOOOOOOO WANTED to see them -Ophelia and Theo get together and NOW I have to wonder what Jared said in the note! I LOVE LOVE LOVE YOUR STORY AND YOUR WRITING!
Things have just been very chaotic around here lately for me and I cannot see my way into the light anymore-I just want you to know I didn't intentionally mean to blow this story off or any of the others I haven't kept up with. I will support whatever your decision is and will always be watching for something from you!
| Alaeryel chapter 16 . 12/22/2012
ANOTHER MAGNIFICENT JOB Life-I LOVED the bathroom scene-PERFECTION! I also LOVED the lunch scene and CANNOT wait to see the reactions to his announcement! As there is one more chapter I am on my way there now!
| artist98 chapter 17 . 11/18/2012
No! Please don't end the story! It's amazing and I hope you get more inspiration!
| Nami98 chapter 17 . 11/17/2012
THIS IS FREAKIN AMAZING ON SO MANY LEVELS YOU DONT EVEN KNOW IT, BRO. OHMIGOD.
Please, for the love of God, update soon, you are an outstanding writer, and leaving this story would be a HUGE waste! I LOVE IT! ASKJHFKJAWGASG its too good to describe! I would definitely reread this again if it weren't already late, honestly, and its just...WOW. all i can say!
| Alaeryel chapter 15 . 10/14/2012
OH BLOODY HELL-I REALLY REALLY WANTED MORE TO READ HERE GIRL-and I need to apologize-I called Ophelia-Olivia-it is almost 3 a.m. here and my mind and eyes apparently are faltering and should go to bed-I am going with my sis in the morning to visit my mom in Dinuba at a Care center so early morning! I just wanted to try to get caught up with my reading but my body is giving up it apprears! DAMN though-POOR Theo-figures he would have to face Jared so soon and what an asshole he is or can be! I loved how every time Theo opened his mouth he bantered with himself-I COULDN'T HELP BUT SMIRK UNCONTROLLABLYIT WAS FUNNIER AS ALL GET UP! I will be watching for more even though chapter 15 appeared while I was reading the earlier chapters-EXCEPTIONAL, FUNNY, BRILLIANT AND PERFECTION AS USUAL Shadow-GREAT JOB!
| Alaeryel chapter 14 . 10/14/2012
DAMN DAMN DAMN-this INTENSITY is KILLING me Shadow-OUT OF THIS UNIVERSE! Maybe there is some smidgeon of like for Jayden/Jared but still like her with Theo! Was it just a regular crash or was it someone trying to kill her? I know she has to live but please tell me hat Bullhead lives too! BEAUTIFUL AND WONDERFUL as usual my DEAR FRIEND!
| Alaeryel chapter 13 . 10/14/2012
OMG Shadow -DAMN I WAS NOT expecting this -you TOTALLY BLEW ME AWAY! First Serah killed herself-why? Then Olivia has a fiance and one that I am not so sure I like much-I PREFER her with Theo myself! DAMN EXCEPTIONAL WRITING AND AMAZING SHOCKING ABILITY! I am now on to the next chapter!
| Alaeryel chapter 11 . 9/26/2012
LOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOVED IT Shadow-IMMENSELY! My heart broke for her BUT also PROUD OF HOW SHE HANDLED HERSELF! I didn't EXPECT mafia of her father and BOY DID HE STEP IN SHIT didn't he? I am in COMPLETE and UTTER AMAZEMENT with both the story and your writing my FRIEND! WHAT AN INTERESTING AND INTRIGUING TWIST YOU THREW INTO THIS MESS! Can hardly wait for more as usual -ALWAYS LOOKING FOR MORE!
| Alaeryel chapter 10 . 9/19/2012
OMG Shadow-WHAT THE HELL IS HAPPENING? What is up with the kidnappings? How did her father die? DAMN EXCELLENT CHAPTER AND absolutely KILLING ME! Will be looking for another chapter eagerly but also patiently! BRILLIANT JOB AS USUAL MY FRIEND!
| Alaeryel chapter 9 . 9/17/2012
now to add you back to my lists with this story and new name