Reviews for COMATOSE
FallenNightmares chapter 2 . 8/28/2013
Very interesting! I've got many questions and I can't wait to see what comes next. There are some places I feel should be elaborated or clarified. For example, in the prolouge when she's taking her jog she comments on the mysterious boy's shirtlessness, but then later a thought comes to her that she shouldn't be alone at night. So, is she taking an early morning run or a late night run? Just some instances like that I feel could use some more clarification.
Keep up the good work!

p.s - Could you also review some of my work please?
Anehalia chapter 2 . 9/5/2012
I like your writing style and the story. I will add it to my community.
K.D. Wagner chapter 2 . 9/5/2012
Action packed! Looking forward to reading more.
K.D. Wagner chapter 1 . 9/5/2012
I like this so far. The writing is easy to read and a couple lines even got me to smile on this early rainy morning. Definately will be reading more.
Ginger36 chapter 2 . 9/5/2012
This story holds a lot of promise! Judging by the synopsis, it sounds like it'll be very original ;) Your writing is really good for the most part, and i can't wait to read more! update soon :)