Reviews for Drown
Harmful Love chapter 1 . 9/16/2012
I'm speechless, this amazing and so very powerful! Keep up the writing
evilestguyever chapter 1 . 9/8/2012
This is actually how I feel right at this moment... well, mostly. I want to believe that my girlfriend actually does care, but it always seems like she's busy with something and I am the one who has to make time to speak with her or even to text her.

That aside, I really like this. Are you actually a musician? Just wondering. I have yet to pick up an instrument in this lifetime, but I plan to and I hope that with actual experience playing an instrument, I'll be able to put music to the words in my head.
CrystalShardsOfRain chapter 1 . 9/7/2012
I like it, its very detailed and it tells a story. Write more!
DarkInkyDreamer chapter 1 . 9/5/2012
I love these lyrics they're really good, I can imagine a melody for them in my head as they flow so well together. I think the first verse is definitely my favourite, especially these lines: 'I've tried to wash away the nasty bitter taste/Of those hateful words from my lips/With a thousand kisses.' becasue of the contrast between the 'hateful words' and 'a thousand kisses' creates such a powerful image. A great write!

xx