|Reviews for My Mini Saga Short Story|
| Samsonet chapter 1 . 9/5/2012
Let me say this: it is OH SO tempting to tear this story apart. If you had made the summary an actual summary of the story, I might have let it pass. But the author's note is longer than the story itself, and that's only annoying.
That said, fix the summary and title and I can see this thing becoming an extremely popular online fic. By all means, continue.