Reviews for Grandma's Bracelet
Sadwyn chapter 1 . 11/5/2012
I really enjoyed this story, it was quite short and sweet. Meaningful message, charming style, well put together. I wish I could be more helpful and give you some better constructive criticism, but I really don't see a lot of ways to improve on it. The repetition is used well, it doesn't get dull or overused. Grandma's illness might be a little heavy for a bed time story, but it's touched on lightly and not too depressing or anything. All in all I think it's a great story, thanks for writing it!
maryssa mommy's girl chapter 1 . 9/26/2012
good
Runic Birdsong chapter 1 . 9/15/2012
I love this short story. It has a lot of meaning behind it, and somehow, I can relate to this. It was very enjoyable. Great work!
Fresh Wildflower chapter 1 . 9/7/2012
Oh, this was such a cute and wonderful story! Thank you for writing it.

I also love the description of the bracelet.
not Ross chapter 1 . 9/5/2012
very, very cute. I'm not a fan of the 3-word review, but this is wonderfully written and very fun to read. I can just see the pictures to go with it