Reviews for Whiplash
theGirlNightwing chapter 3 . 3/1/2013
hmm
its good, but rushed. you might want to work on that
dogtagsinmyheart21 chapter 3 . 2/10/2013
that was amazing!
X WARRIOR 1 chapter 1 . 12/23/2012
space your sentences out, this too distracing and difficult to read
PartyRockAnthem chapter 1 . 9/5/2012
Good story but space your sentences very hard to read.