Reviews for Elevated
breakthehabit chapter 1 . 10/11/2013
Aww. That was super cuteee.
Artly chapter 1 . 8/1/2013
This was such a cute story. I really liked the chemistry that the two characters shared. The plot progressed nicely and I thought that it flowed evenly. For such a short piece there was a beginning middle and end with an appropriate climax (literally)! I also liked the diversity culture wise with the two characters. Nice job.
flooj9235 chapter 1 . 7/28/2013
This is my favorite. A few little things like "omg" in the middle of the narration threw me, but overall, this is one of the best stories I've read on here. Awesome job! :)
Lunaticflower chapter 1 . 7/27/2013
This story is defenitely a new favorite of mine. Especially all the feelings, it was amazing. I really want to experience a moment once like when they met the butch/femme couple on the high line. Thank you so much for sharing!
himitsugaby chapter 1 . 7/24/2013
Awww I love it, it was so sweet!
sdiazm16 chapter 1 . 6/22/2013
Hahahaha love this last line killed me
Guest chapter 1 . 11/25/2012
Oh, my. This is such an adorable story. I literally found myself giggling and laughing throughout. I loved the ending too, such a sweet conclusion. Loved it.(:
Starbelly chapter 1 . 9/11/2012
Amazing... Your writing was beautiful; I really enjoyed reading it. Really a great read. Thank you so much for sharing this wonderful story.
TheNewYorkDork chapter 1 . 9/7/2012
Omigod. I love it so much. Adorable. Fantastic. Amazing.