Reviews for Fake
crywolf-girl23 chapter 1 . 3/2/2013
So true... You managed to express this matter very well.
I will agree with the previous reviewer,"fixed" sounds a lot better.
StarburstAwesomeness chapter 1 . 9/7/2012
Beautiful poem. :) It has a good meaning too.
Just wanted to point out that when you're talking about the "fix", which was very effective when you repeated it, you might want to say "fixed" past-tense instead. And hair die is hair dye. (I think)
Thanks for the good poem!