Reviews for Fear
AppleCrumble chapter 1 . 11/25/2012
Really great poem. You are really good at expressing emotions with an amazing lucidity, the fear in this one is immense. I liked the way the lines are broken apart, amazing!
Ophelia Schmit chapter 1 . 9/8/2012
Very nice, explaining fear! You got it right off the bat. And you didn't sugar coat it, you didn't add flowery language, you made it natural. Natural is good.


P.S. No need to return the favor! Trust me, I don't beg for reviews, I can really live without one. "I just like helping you improve on your writing." That's one reason why I'm here.