Reviews for Fear
AppleCrumble chapter 1 . 11/25/2012
Really great poem. You are really good at expressing emotions with an amazing lucidity, the fear in this one is immense. I liked the way the lines are broken apart, amazing!
Ophelia Schmit chapter 1 . 9/8/2012
Very nice, explaining fear! You got it right off the bat. And you didn't sugar coat it, you didn't add flowery language, you made it natural. Natural is good.

-Hermie

P.S. No need to return the favor! Trust me, I don't beg for reviews, I can really live without one. "I just like helping you improve on your writing." That's one reason why I'm here.