|Reviews for one more night|
| Beth Brooks chapter 1 . 9/10/2012
sooo i noticed that no one ever actually criques your poetry, there all to busy begging for you to live and not hurt yourself, and seeing as you know where i stand on that :) i think i'll just do the undone hehe, very nice, i mean i get the message and all i just can't help but feel like the last strand of emotions are a bit out of place, if they werer written in to a line it'd flow better, i mean right now the pop, and i think the point you wanted to pop was that "the end" [is near] but i could be wrong on that. any way just my opinion! i still think your amazing, you know that!
| True Talker chapter 1 . 9/7/2012
NO. NO. I DON'T want the end to be near NOT for SOMEONE that I LOVE that I DEEPLY CARE FOR.