Reviews for Auro, Erin, Jecca, Blake, Menthol, and me, Mortis
w3ardo chapter 1 . 12/1/2012
um yeah, it would be better if you didnt do the single space because it would be so much easier to read- do remember this is a computer screen and not a piece of paper in a book.
also, for dialogue, every time a new person speaks, you must indent.