|Reviews for Meum Stabile Petra|
| Lolitroy chapter 1 . 5/5/2013
I think you should split it into separate chapters, so it isn't hard to read, but other than that it's sweet :D
I like the originality.
| Svfn chapter 1 . 3/10/2013
Interesting idea to personify the planets and related planetary bodies as you have. It felt a bit forced in the center, like you lost your rhythm a moment, but you reclaimed it and the change coincided with the story itself. Well done, interesting concept. Good work my friend.