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| thoseforgottenwords chapter 1 . 4/3/2013
Incredible, just incredible. I cannot say how much I love this poem, very beautiful writing. I especially like the line about 'letting the colours into me'.
| Lolitroy chapter 1 . 12/18/2012
Oh, another poem that has taken my breath away. Amazing! The pace and rhythm flowed excellently with the mood. I really like this!
| gcpdguy chapter 1 . 9/10/2012
It's funny, because up until you called out the writer, I thought you were speaking about writing all along - which I guess is how the title serves to warp my sensitivity, which is great!
Also interesting is the take of plane: up and away, surrounded by people, but still alone.
"Rainbright"! Stealing it. Not for writing, just as a thought to play around in my head. Fantastic!
Interested in your take on punctuation. I feel like you can get more kick out of the lines without it, but then that's likely just me projecting my own stance on you, which is perhaps unfair. I use it in my own poems only sparingly, as I feel the line breaks suffice enough.