Reviews for Afterbirth
S.A chapter 1 . 1/23/2013
While i do admit that this is somewhat disturbing since i can clearly imagine it in my head, I cant help but still find this super cool! it rhymes and everything! ;) though don't ya think doing something like that's kinda not good for you? i think you could get sick, why not just kille'm? well what ever (sorry for babbling) this is still a good poem! :)
shadowednexus chapter 1 . 10/14/2012
I love the horror of this piece. The rage feels a little subdued but it is buoyed by the cannibalism.