Reviews for Breaking
asinineWhisperer chapter 1 . 6/3/2013
This is brilliant and I cannot wait to hit the next button and read more! Very emotional and I as a reader can connect.
VivWriter chapter 2 . 5/19/2013
I really love this style, i once read a book very similar to this; it also used free verse instead of prose. this is great!
myheart4you chapter 14 . 10/10/2012
aaaugghh... So goood. I can feel what this chick is feeling man, and its not good :)

Sooo sad.
SecretLongings chapter 10 . 9/28/2012
This is amazing! I can really relate to what your saying. Please publish more.
I caught myself chapter 1 . 9/27/2012
This is good. I look forward to finishing it. Well done and thank you for sharing this.
sitting.waiting.watching chapter 8 . 9/22/2012
I really feel where this character is coming from. The writing is readable and flows nicely! Well written, good job! Glad that you aren't actually depressed or feel like this :)
Guest chapter 6 . 9/18/2012
I-is this actually h-hapening to y-you? PLEASE SAY IT ISN'T SO!