Reviews for The Prime Univerm
Shouta Izukai chapter 3 . 12/26/2012
I love this so far! It's really unique and interesting! I can't wait for the next one!
WhiteAngelDragon chapter 2 . 9/23/2012
Over all another chapter well done. For future reference though I'd double check your sentences to make sure you don't have grammer errors. Also more detail never hurts. But again great chapter look forward to more.
WhiteAngelDragon chapter 1 . 9/20/2012
Interesting first chapter. Hope to see more. I would if I were you though, read each sentence and make sure each sentence makes sense both by its self and together. Be careful that you don't repeat words ok. Just a little advice from a fellow writer. Also stay positive it helps the process.